Link- https://youtu.be/vwVu3NfnVko
I believe that the most of the feedback was very helpful. I was told that I should pronounce words a little bit clearer, and have a little bit more energy when I deliver the elevator pitch, which seems like helpful advice, which I tried to improve the second time around. I did not receive any feedback that I think was silly or unnecessary. I attempted to incorporate the bits of advice into my second video.
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